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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First off, I just wanna say that I appreciate the fact that you constantly ask for decries and make room for improvement. Not a lot of people take criticism so well (least in America).

To the main subject! I think you did the whole catch of the scenery very well. You have a man on a flying boat in the sky, while he flies his kite. I see a bit of a metaphor or symbolism with the star-shaped kite in the sky. Then there's a small patch of land at the very bottom left corner to confirm that he is, in fact, flying through the air. I truly love the whole picture.

If I look really hard for any improvement you can work on, it would probably be the clouds. They look like giant iceburges to me so maybe next time you paint clouds try making them look more fluffy somehow. It's probably nothing, but I really am doing my best to help you improve because this is truly an amazing piece.